I particularly like how this piece turned out. It was quite the discussion during critiquing time in the Melinda Tidwell workshop. One of the most valuable portion of this workshop was when each day we put up two or three pieces of work to have the group evaluate. Usually Melinda went first. She would say what she really liked about each piece and then she would zero in on something that she felt was not quite right. The orange "rising sun" bothered her until she tore a piece of paper that looks sort of like a cloud and held it to the piece. Voila! It is just what was needed!