When I look at the composition of this piece holding the postcard in front of me I am fine with it. Looking at it online version I think perhaps it needs some more toward the top. Perhaps it needs something going off the edges of the postcard. I will thing about it some more.
One of my favorite color pairings, red/orange, and turquoise.
I think it is very successful.
The eyes definitely have it in this piece, John!
I like how you have composed it, john. But i know what you mean. There are times when in real life a collage looks good and then “thru the eye of the camera” suddenly i can see it so differently.
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