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| Jailbird |
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| Rapscallion |
I just do not think these two postcards work. I post them because I post everything I work on. I tried out so many things and there are portions of each card I do like but overall I do not care for either of them. I think it is the composition? Hmm! What I do like are the hands. I like the color choices. I like the target birds on Rapscallion. I like the lines made with the sewing tool. All together, NO!
4 comments:
Well I like them both very much- I think they are strong compositions and I like the black and white standout from the color but balanced with the black parts- the dots and birds and sew lines. Very nice John.
I like them both very much as well!!! I think the black and white photos going off the page create some interest.
i like them too. I'm not sure how to feel about the men -- are the "jail birds"? if so, the round black dots may be too playful?
I like them both reversed! And with the angled one straightened. Seem to work better for me that way.
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